- Some of the lip-syncing is slightly out of sync
- The length of a few shots are too long - vary shots
- Repeat images on the chorus - ongoing theme
- Story/Dancing contrast implied more
- Make sure all shots are in focus
How will I fix these issues?
-> In order to sort out the lip-syncing, I will edit a few of the shots in order to get it in better time
-> I will vary the shots more, in order to be more interesting for the audience
-> The chorus shots need to be linked to each other - ongoing theme (same shot twice)
-> Create a split screen between the dance and the lip-syncing to portray contrast
-> Edit out the out-of-focus shots, replace with a varied shot
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